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Literature Text
Green memories await.
Green lawn
Broken slate.
A message written on;
Within
White chalk; memory grim.
Hide under blue sky
Open air;
Wide eyes.
Don't remember
Don't cry!
Red anger bursts inside.
White clouds...
White chalk!
Don't cry!
Don't talk!
This is it. That's all.
The green grass will catch my
fall
Green lawn
Broken slate.
A message written on;
Within
White chalk; memory grim.
Hide under blue sky
Open air;
Wide eyes.
Don't remember
Don't cry!
Red anger bursts inside.
White clouds...
White chalk!
Don't cry!
Don't talk!
This is it. That's all.
The green grass will catch my
fall
Just a quick poem I wrote.
Comments and critiques welcomed. I'd like to know:
Do you like it? What do you think?
Do you understand the story?
Do you like the voice/tone of the poem?
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